Duel 13 was yet another tie and again, a complete tie. Both poems got the same number of votes and both had a 3.50 rating.
On the left was famous "beat" poem Allen Ginsberg and his "The Terms in Which I Think of Reality". Ginsberg rose to fame in the 1950s as the pre-eminent "beat" poet and was an icon through the turbulent '60s and '70s. On the left was Justin Bienvenue's "Brutal Mentality" from his self-published Like a Box of Chocolate. Justin's poetry definitely takes a different tack than a lot of the other "unknown" poets featured here but I like it and it has a certain dark optimism. The Terms in Which I Think of Reality Reality is a question of realizing how real the world is already. Time is Eternity, ultimate and immovable; everyone's an angel. It's Heaven's mystery of changing perfection : absolute Eternity changes! Cars are always going down the street, lamps go off and on. It's a great flat plain; we can see everything on top of a table. Clams open on the table, lambs are eaten by worms on the plain. The motion of change is beautiful, as well as form called in and out of being. Next : to distinguish process in its particularity with an eye to the initiation of gratifying new changes desired in the real world. Here we're overwhelmed with such unpleasant detail we dream again of Heaven. For the world is a mountain of shit : if it's going to be moved at all, it's got to be taken by handfuls. Man lives like the unhappy whore on River Street who in her Eternity gets only a couple of bucks and a lot of snide remarks in return for seeking physical love the best way she knows how, never really heard of a glad job or joyous marriage or a difference in the heart : or thinks it isn't for her, which is her worst misery. +++++++++++++++ Brutal Mentality To be considerate of others Is for the way of the wise There’s more fighters than lovers Leaving us with blackened eyes They give without taking Ask without permission Their actions they are faking Yet there’s no lining of suspicion If only the brain burned Upon thinking too much Maybe then they’d be concerned Of others feelings and such But they don’t and it’s a joke Only thinking of themselves The mind is but a broken yolk Your like dust on a shelf Collected and forgotten Looked upon from time to time It’s as if your aura is rotten It’s as if you’ve committed a crime But they are in the wrong Needing a check back into reality Perhaps their intentions all along Pushing us with brutal mentality There’s a party going on And everyone’s having a good time And if you haven’t done so already Lick the walls they taste like strawberries But the room is really concrete white There’s actually rats crawling out of holes Only one person is in the room Licking the walls will lead to lead poisoning
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